Dear Ramon,
Sharing my most precious poem,
Memories like the warmth of winter’s sunshine
soothing the cold skin,so warm, so tender
cuddling like a bare body of a loving soul
Every touch reviving every part of the skin under
Like a new leaf growing from a dead stem
Bringing a new hope deep within
Every nerve challenging the soul’s originality
Saying,Shed the dust and hear the heart breathing
Precious things are hard to find,treasured once found
Like a pearl lost in a big sea, unexpectedly found
Rising as a woman started feeling so sinfully beautiful
Like the rising sun between the snowy mountains, sparkling all around.
Firmness breathes with the inner softness like a gold dust
As a child’s innocent chortle, seizing away all the pain
All the long forgotten tunes re inhibits in the lost soul
Fresh as the delicate fragrance of earth after the first rain.
Memories like the lullaby of infancy
living in the innocent sleep, in a mysterious depth
Sweet tickle reminding every blissful second was once real
Forever resting inside like an untold promise beautifully kept!
Image: Sharing one of my random clicks! Sunshine after Rain #MobilePhotography
This is an amazing write. So many beautiful lines and the imagery is powerful. Beautifully penned.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I really appreciate it. 🙂
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Welcome. 🙂
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Well done
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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You’re welcome
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As another has said well done! Beautiful.
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Thanks so much. Glad you liked it 🙂
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Beautiful and thoughtful, truly deep 🙂 ❤
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Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it 🙂
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Memories so beautifully described in the poem, makes it a wonderful read.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment
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You’re welcome Snigdha.
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Wow! Really beautiful! I love the words!
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate it 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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My pleasure, Snigdha. 🙂
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nicely played with words..
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Thank you so much Akshay
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Snigda, the last two time’s I’ve tried to go to your site to like your post, I get a page that says oops! This link can’t be found. You might want to see what WP has to say about that. Hugs, N 🙂 ❤
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I didn’t like my last post much, so I deleted it. The link still might be visible to the readers.Thank you so much for visiting my site and showing the concern N. I really appreciate it. I hope to come up with better posts worth reading. Have a wonderful weekend 🙂
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Very Beautifully said about memory, Snigdha! 🙂
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Thank you so much Amy 🙂
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Beautiful!
Never forget the name of Goldust 😉
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Thank you. I wont 🙂 Gold dust is never meant to be forgotten!
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Your poem is very beautiful. I find myself drifting from word to word like a leaf upon the stream that runs through your poem. I like that it has the depth of a poem that you could read repeatedly and get more meaning out of it each time. Excellent.
Thank you.
Tony R
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Brought a smile on my face.:)
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The image is evocative, and then when I reached the poem, I was so ready for the ideas you presented. Very beautiful post!
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Thanks a ton Tracey for your wonderful comment. 🙂
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WOW!! That was a splendid splash of words,the words are weaved from your heart and touches the readers drifting us to our related past:) Totally loved it:)
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it 🙂
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